begining the totally awesome title

Deeep in a land, a land that has been overun by laws, and where pleasure is somthing that only exists in shadows or, underground. the cities have no lighting, the sun no longer shines upon the dark land. the sky is covered by evil, nothing seems to be able to do anything about it. peoples only link between each other is the internet. everything is downloadable. from food to excercise equpment iven the air that is pumped into the homes. (think of Metropoplis, Fritz Lang 1927). everyone has they're amount of space and data usage. your home is as simple as. run-lawn-foundation-beam-upright1'13''-so on. human contact is virtually outdated.
but a group of underground syndicates have decided to organize what will be the largest party in the world. they believe that this will finally get rid of the darkness, that keeps us apart and locked in our world of technology. which is in fact awesome but is also being hel by the outrageous laws that keep the the world shut out of P.L.U.R. they will face many challenges along the way but will succeed in thye're adventures to come.

indeed that is exactly what i was thinking when i started writing this. we could eventually turn this into a book. we will see how interesting the story gets. idk i was feeling pretty stoned when i wrote this. so i guess only persistency will make it blow up.

Lol. Ok. But this forum section is only for posting stories. Talking about them and whatnot should be done on the "Chat" section or through the PM system. :p